Roatarydial's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Return Of SMG]

Waste of space.

[OneDirection Uncut]

You clearly have the drive and talent to be a great animator, but there is significantly to much nonsense and forced shock factor in this animation. I understand that you set out to deliver shock factor, but in the end it came across as another "look at all of this poop and dick I can cram in here" flash.

Honestly, if you removed all of the farting, pooping, and dick images I believe you would have had a stronger shock factor. Its like the difference between beautiful music and abstract noise. There is a fine line between well done execution and absolutely over done drivel. I believe you more than crossed that line in this flash video, but I also believe that in time you will find balance in time and put out great animations. Best of luck to you.

HenryLong responds:

Thanks I guess, Ill try harder on that, my next cartoon is going to be more purely out of my hatred of a certain musician. That one will be more story driven

[A break up]

Even with my audio settings capped, I could still barely understand what was being said.

rsetienne responds:

i toned down the volume a little too much, well its just a guy breaking up with his girlfriend, you can guess why